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Thursday, January 25, 2007

Writing Assignment



It was going to be a long day. But worth it, Cleo was sure. She new something was down there and if she had to sit on the lawn all day, well that is what she would do.



She cocked her head to hear the faint rustlings better. Her lips twitched involuntarily at the thought of the tasty catch that lurked under the earth, directly below her.



“ Cleo!!! Cleo come on in!”



Cleo sighed. Did SHE not understand that there work going on here. That Cleo was going to be too darn busy sitting here to ‘come in’ anywhere, unless, she thought, unless there is food. She stood up and stretched out finally feeling the chill of the damp grass beneath her and ambled inside. Lunch.



After lunch, Cleo once again meowed to be let out. Her befuddled human complied with a sigh and she ambled back out side to check the progress. She stood very still and cocked her head again. Yes, she could hear the sounds much better now. It was getting MUCH closer. Soon, she thought, soon you will be mine. She searched around till she was sure she was directly above the activity. She settled down and tucked in her little front paws.



Baffled chickadees swooped over her head on the way to the feeder. They couldn’t understand why they were not the objects of the cat’s attention.



The human came outside to ask her what was going on. Cleo answered with a twitch of her whiskers and that was it. The human asked if she wanted to come inside the house. Cleo ignored her. She could now FEEL something underneath her.



As the afternoon wore on, Cleo’s attention started to drift, the grass was cold beneath her and she could feel ants tickling her paws. Time for a good clean. She set to, starting at the left hindquarters and she soon became absorbed in her ablutions.



So absorbed that at first she didn’t notice the grass moving beside her. Did not notice the first little bits of dirt being pushed upwards. With a start she swung around and froze whiskers and ears straining. This was it, she thought gleefully, I will finally see and hopefully taste what lies beneath!



She watched the growing mound with fascination. Every muscle was tensed and ready. She could smell the creature, a loamy, musty scent. The dirt piled up and up, Cleo gathered her back legs up under her, ready to leap upon her prize.



Suddenly there was a commotion behind her. The human was yelling and laughing, “A mole, a mole!”

“Cleo, NOOOOO!” As a tiny pink nose poked up out of the mound of earth, and just as Cleo tensed for the catch, hands swooped down upon her and pulled up and away, away from the prize, she struggled and yowled in protest. She was taken inside and the glass door was slammed shut against her nose. What was the stupid human thinking! In frustrated helplessness, she watched the little creature peek up out of the dirt, then slowly snuffle back down and gone. Gone from her clutches.



Stupid human.







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12 comments:

SQT said...

I love the way the dog thinks about her owner. "The human." "Stupid human." That's probably exactly what they think. ;)

Susan Miller said...

Precious. The whole time I was picturing a cat for some reason. No matter, you led us nicely through these moments with her.
I love the anticipation caused by the growing mound....and then FOILED! Poor thing, she had waited so patiently.

RK Sterling said...

Cute. I like the way she only answered with a "twitch of her whiskers and that was that." I could see it. I felt sorry for poor Cleo to lose her prize, and could feel her angry squirming when she was carried back in the house.

My cat would have slapped me with his tail before going back to ignoring me. :) Be gone!

Anonymous said...

tis based on a true tale and my old and dearly missed kitty...and the mole did take all day to dig up!

whimsical brainpan said...

Great story. And I'm positive that cats think we are stupid. I've seen it on their faces.

DesLily said...

we all should have such concentration and determination!

real stories are the best!!

Stewart Sternberg (half of L.P. Styles) said...

I think you and SQT have shown that you might have some talent in the area of writing for younger readers.

This is cute Crunchy. Usually, when I say that, it's a bad thing. This time, it's a good thing.
PEACE

Anonymous said...

I though that 'cute' can be a little too easy.
I was thinking about this last night..for someone who sure loves dark sci fi and so forth, I am sure lacking or blanking for ideas when it comes to putting ink to paper.

I need to really push myself and write something totally out of the box for me.

Oh and we need to work on my mom...SHE has the best cat story...a christmas story.

We need to get her to post it up on her blog for all to see...you would all love it.

HopScotch said...

Great Story Crunchy, there are a million Cleo stories to be told! She did bring a mole home one day though. I came downstairs and the little gentleman in the fur coat was laying quietly on his back, little pink nose and feet in the air, quite dead, not a mark on him. Cleo just sat in the back ground licking her paws and smirked at me.

DirkStar said...

Where ae you getting these exercises?

They are really neat and I'd like to try some of them.

Anonymous said...

Hey Dirk...check out

http://house-of-sternberg.blogspot.com/

Mr Sternberg is our writing 'prof'!

SQT said...

So Stewart, when you called mine 'cute' it was a bad thing?